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时间：2019-04-28

请以Television 为题，写一篇有关看电视所带来的具有积极影响的英语短文

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书面表达：（一）

电视在人们的日常生活起着重要的教育作用，电视传播极大地地影响着每一个人的生活。请以“Television” 为题，写一篇有关看电视所带来的具有积极影响的英语短文。

要求：1、字数在120左右。

2、语言流畅，表达清晰。

3、书面整洁美观大方。

范文：

Television

Television presents a vivid world in front of us. Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world.

Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for people who can not go to formal university.

For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as “The Animal World” and “The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald”. Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes.Furthermore, we can learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs. And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercise in some special TV training courses. In short, the effect of TV’s educational role is becoming more and more obvious.

Having viewed these aspects, and with many more TV programs produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant.

评语：

1、文中写了电视所带来的积极影响。

2、电视对人们生活的影响，选择几个很有说服力的方面进行写作，有层次，有新意。

3、连接词（过渡词）的使用到位。【恰当地使用联接词可使文章条理清楚，文字连贯流畅，见文中的黑体字。】

4、成功使用了“三段论”的写作模式。【书面表达写作的最佳选择。

第一段开门见山，直奔主题。第二段要摆出事实或提出论据，或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。最后一段，得出结论或理由。】

5、最后的总结句，运用了分词短语结构，with的复合结构连接上下文，体现了句式的多样性和灵活性。

6、使用了高级词汇，提高了档次。如：present vivid educational broaden scope recipe等。

7、高级句式的巧妙运用，点睛之笔，体现作者英语的厚实功底。如：宾语从句what is happening half way across the world，that our life will become even more significant，定语从句who can not go to formal university，with的复合结构with many more TV programs produced，by短语by watching等等。

8、高级短语的灵活运用恰到好处。如：play an important educational role，provides something for somebody，half way across the world，broaden their scope of knowledge，in short等。

分析：

1、Television presents a vivid world in front of us.

析：译文：电视在我们面前展示出一个栩栩如生的世界。

这是一个主题句。

Present是动词“呈现”的意思；

a vivid world一个栩栩如生的世界；

in front of在---的面前

2、Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world.

析：译文：通过电视，我们可以了解世界的另一边正在发生的事情。

what is happening half way across the world. 这是一个宾语从句。

half way across the world.世界的另一端

3、Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.

析;译文：电视在我们的日常生活中起着重要的教育作用。

play an important educational role起着重要的教育作用

in our daily life. 在我们的日常生活中

4、For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for people who can not go to formal university.

析：译文：一方面，电视大学为那些没有进入正式大学的人们提供一个机会。

for one thing一方面

provides something for somebody 为某人提供某事

go to formal university. 上正式大学

people whocan not go to formal university.含有定语从句，修饰people.

5、For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as “The Animal World”and “The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald”

析：译文：通过观看受欢迎的节目像“动物世界”和“米老鼠和唐老鸭”拓宽他们的视野。

for another另一方面

broaden their scope of knowledge拓宽他们的视野

by doing通过做某事

The Animal World动物世界

The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald米老鼠和唐老鸭

6、Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes.

析：译文：另外，女人们能了解最新时装和制作水果蛋糕的方法。

learn about了解

the latest fashion of dresses最新时装

the best recipe for making fruit cakes. 制作水果蛋糕的方法

7、Furthermore, we can learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs.