提示:本文共有 1591 个字,阅读大概需要 4 分钟。
初一英语作文:加入英语俱乐部
相信大家中一定有对英语非常感兴趣的人,英语俱乐部是一个英语狂热爱好者锻炼并且提升自己能力的地方。不过,想要加入俱乐部却还需要有一定的资质。你都有什么优点与特长呢?
题目
学校English story telling club正在招募新成员(member), 假如你叫Lucy,请根据提示给俱乐部负责老师Mr. Li写一封电子邮件。
要点如下:
你擅长英语,愿意加入这个俱乐部; 你对用英语讲故事感兴趣,能讲很多英语故事; 讲述一次值得你记忆的假期经历。(包括:时间与地点,天气,活动(3件),感受)
注意:
1. 恰当的过度与结尾。 2. 书写整洁,字数:60 80字,电子邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Li,
I know the school English story telling club wants some new members now. I’m happy to tell you Yours, Lucy
答案
one possible version:
Dear Mr.Li,
I know the school English story telling club wants some new members now. I’m happy to tell you I want to join the club because I am good at English.And I am also interested in telling stories in English.I can tell many stories in English.I usually tell my friends some stories after class.
I am telling my story in English.One day I went camping with my friends in the mountain.It was sunny at first.I took some photos.Later it began to rain.We had to put up our tents.Suddently Li lei saw a snake climbing on the ground.He was too scared to move.I know the snake has no ears but it can feel things moving.Then we jumped up and down.It moved into the forest.We were safe. We were very happy.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Lucy
解析
本文是学生熟悉的信的格式,在信中介绍自己的爱好时要用一般现在时,要注意句子的主语。但是在讲述自己的故事的时候,一定要注意时态的变化,叙述以前的一次旅行一般要用过去式。
亮点说明短文用了一些短语和句式,增加了文章的色彩,如:And I am also interested in telling stories in English. Later it began to rain .We had to put up our tents. Suddently Li lei saw a snake climbing on the ground.He was too scared to move.等。文中用了一些连词如and,because等,使句子结构变的复杂了。用了一些also,later等,使上下文衔接的很好。
看到此处说明本文对你还是有帮助的,关于“初一英语作文:加入英语俱乐部 – 木木英语作文网”留言是大家的经验之谈相信也会对你有益,推荐继续阅读下面的相关内容,与本文相关度极高!