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老师的批改： 文章主体时态用的过去时，很好。并且用到了定语从句（第一句），条件状语从句（第二段第三句）。用到了一处被动语态，“it wasfound by Sarah and Jessica. ” 并且挖掘主题，从书中学到了要帮助他人的道理，真的很难得。加油！ 但要注意基本的单词拼写。另外：1. 写英语书名用的标点是“”，如“A New Zealand Adventure”2. lose 的过去式为 lost 过去分词也是 lost3. In the course of 改为 In the end4. some thing 改为 something5. Its 改为 That is7. “读后感”译为 Thought after reading 不说 Reading Sensation8. 题目不妨写成：Help Other People and Make Yourself happy改后稿： Thought after reading Help Other People and Make Yourself happyLiu Yuxuan “A New Zealand Adventure” is an interesting book that waswritten by Jan Thornburn. The leading roles are Sarah and Jessica.During their holiday in New Zealand, they met a boy called Michael.The boy lost his mobile phone on a taxi, and it was found by Sarahand Jessica. The girls wanted to return the phone to Michael. Inthe end，they returned the phone.During this time , they experiencedmany interesting things. In the end, they found Michael and gaveback his phone. In return for this, Michael gave two girls asurprise two tickets of the Whale watch! After I read this book, I understand something.That is “help otherpeople and make yourself happy”. If we help people, we will feelvery happy and maybe we can get some surprise like Sarah andJessica. From this book, I know New Zealand is a really beautifulcountry, too. I want to go there when I grow up.
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